Saturday, October 31, 2020

WeWriWa – clocks and calendars

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Continuing a scene from The Long Dark in Mikey’s point of view. Mikey is trying to make sense of the adults’ conversation over dinner.

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Of course, he knew all about orbital mechanics. The world--his world--spinning on its side, one pole facing the sun, then the other. Orbital period thirteen Earth standard years, axial rotation thirty Earth standard hours. Odd. Clocks were set to the Elysium day/night cycle, and yet the calendar was tied to Earth standard. When people talked about a year they meant an Earth year, not Elysium. Why the inconsistency? An anomaly, but not interesting enough to pursue right now.

Here was the relevant bit. People on the surface forever chasing summer, escaping the deep freeze that came with long years of darkness at this latitude.  

That’s ten sentences. The scene continues ...  

Hence the trek. The migration from autumn in one hemisphere to spring in the other, then back again after another six years. 

It made logical sense, but Mikel baulked at the implications. Leaving his home. Leaving familiarity and security behind. On an intellectual level, he could understand the idea of other towns, other domes with other rooms, but he couldn’t picture it. Couldn’t place himself there. His home was here

This was what he’d locked away. This had happened before. He was fourteen years old now. Earth standard years, that is. He would have been maybe eight then. It figured. He couldn’t remember much from then, but the terror had been real enough to leave its mark.

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14 comments:

Susan Flett Swiderski said...

Ooooh. Great snippet. You've created a very intriguing world. Great imagination. (Oh, and by the way, there's no way THIS old lady will accept any blame if you-know-who gets re-elected. UGH!!!)

Take care, and Happy Halloweeeen!

JSBray said...

Crazy way to live. Constantly moving around. I could understand the reason he does not want to think about it.

Jessica E. Subject said...

Love the world building in this snippet!

Botanist said...

Susan, it's a scary prospect for sure. What is scarier is the fact that over a third of your country still sees nothing wrong in his behavior!

JS, at least the moving only happens every few years, in Earth terms.

Jessica, this was an intriguing world to write about.

Teresa Cypher said...

Doling out little tidbits of what makes Mikel unique... :-) Such a good story!

Anonymous said...

Climate fiction -- I love it. What a horrible world this would be to live on. It's hard to imagine how these people can maintain any sort of civilization or technology.

Hilary Melton-Butcher said...

Hi Ian - it's interesting how Mikey is beginning to relate his present world, to that of earth's life ... I wonder how he can adjust and take the best of both as well as deal with the worst of both. Take care and stay safe - Hilary

Botanist said...

Teresa, Mikel is unique. I hope that's coming across!

Ed, surprisingly, the people manage remarkably well.

Hilary, unfortunately he doesn't adjust too well at all :(

Karen Michelle Nutt said...

Intriguing world.

Alex J. Cavanaugh said...

Something really bad happened last time they move towards the warmth.

Veronica Scott said...

His take on all of it is fascinating and I like seeing this unusual planet through his eyes. Great snippet!

Botanist said...

Karen, it was fun to build :)

Alex, tbh nothing specifically bad happened, other than the trauma of his ordered world being upended.

Veronica, seeing it through his eyes seemed like a good way to convey the setting.

Elaine Cantrell said...

I understand his point of view, but I think I'd rather be in the warm sunshine of spring myself.

Denise Covey said...

Hi Ian. Must confess the beginning of your story went right over my head with the technicalities. But your snippet raised goosebumps. You create an intriguing world.

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