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I’m sharing the opening scene from Wrath of Empire, a prequel to my first novel, Ghosts of Innocence. Crown Prince Julian and his bodyguard, Chalwen, are talking about the late Empress Florence, who they’ve just interred. Julian just asked if the old Empress could have resumed the throne in the event of his fathers death.
Chalwen pondered the question. “In theory, if your uncle Ivan didn't beat her to it. But that's no longer a consideration. You're right. As next in line, you do need to prepare yourself.” More than you can know. Chalwen shuddered again. If anything should happen to Emperor Paul, Ivan had little hope of wresting power from a still-formidable Florence. But young and inexperienced Julian? That was another matter.
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Well done Ian - you always entice us to keep up with you, your characters and the story line. Julian does have lots ahead of him, let alone a great deal to learn. Cheers - and have a happy peaceful time - cheers Hilary
Yes, a contest between Julian and Ivan would be a far different one than between Ivan and Florence. Unless Julian has a lot of help. I sure hope he does! Great snippet! Tweeted.
What a great protector. He sees things so clearly. It can't be an easy task restraining a good-hearted hero from taking risks.
Chalwen is definitely set to prepare Julian for all the possibilities in his future. She seems to have no loyalty to anyone else but him. Great snippet!
So many possibilities for the future, some really awful...and this young prince, blissfully unaware of all of it. Well done snippet!
Hilary, Julian does have a lot to learn.
Jenna, Julian does have help, which he doesn't yet know about.
Nancy, Chalwen does have her work cut out here.
Jessica, her loyalty is the driving force for much of the story.
Veronica, thankfully Julian is unaware of the events to come!
What a great snippet! I am pulled in and intrigued as to what will happen.
The poor young man does need guidance. I'm glad he has a protector who can look out for him.
Chalwen is a compelling character. He's lucky to have her around.
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