Weekend Writing Warriors is a weekly blog hop where participants post eight to ten sentences of their writing. You can find out more about it by clicking on the image.
It’s been nearly a year since I last posted to WWW. Last time, I posted scenes from The Long Dark, which was published last Christmas. Since then, I’ve been busy drafting a new novel. Over the next few weeks, I’m sharing the opening scene from Wrath of Empire, a prequel to my first novel, Ghosts of Innocence.
“Is it wrong of me not to feel sad?”
The question startled Lieutenant Chalwen ap Gwynodd back to the here-and-now. She'd been scanning the tree line and peering into the shadows, alert for anything out of place, when her attention had wandered. A fine stand of thousand-year-old Veshi oaks spread their gnarled canopy over a walkway leading deeper into the Imperial family graveyard. The play of light and shade had distracted Chalwen, a fatal lapse in a bodyguard.
But here, of anywhere on the planet, was surely safe, and the hectic few days of the official state funeral had been exhausting. All the same, Chalwen cursed under her breath and carried out a hurried situation check.
Prince Julian was still gazing at the plain memorial where the family had just interred the ashes of Empress Florence. He tilted his head as if in thought, gazing at the simple inscription carved into the rough stone. Chalwen struggled to read his mood.
8 comments:
Hi Ian - excellent to see your still writing and this sounds an interesting prequel. You've set the scene and let us think about what comes next - take care and all the very best - Hilary
Welcome back, Ian!! You've pulled me right into this new story. Great tease!
Wonderful to have you back, Ian! Great scene setting! Definitely want more!
Welcome back! I always enjoy your writing so much and today's snippet was great. I really could place myself into the scene with them thanks to your description and of course I need to know more now!
Thanks everyone. More to come in the next few weeks.
Nice excerpt. I enjoy your writing, and I'm glad you're back.
That's not an easy question. Her reaction is realistic.
Kate, you're right, it's not an easy question. Further snippets will explore it in more detail.
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