tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post8001549415556049625..comments2024-03-16T07:55:54.153-07:00Comments on Views From the Bald Patch: Weekend Writing Warriors April 22Botanisthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-64230230180999383412018-04-29T11:55:41.201-07:002018-04-29T11:55:41.201-07:00Teresa, something of a pointed statement, maybe :)...Teresa, something of a <i>pointed</i> statement, maybe :)Botanisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-15064517630545332242018-04-28T10:51:34.235-07:002018-04-28T10:51:34.235-07:00Love that final moment of the "dance"! A...Love that final moment of the "dance"! A very clear message to Mabbs. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-23081447489823880492018-04-23T18:44:05.280-07:002018-04-23T18:44:05.280-07:00Christina, luckily for Mabb, knives are Shayla'...Christina, luckily for Mabb, knives are Shayla's specialty :)Botanisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-86180160314504304042018-04-22T20:37:40.610-07:002018-04-22T20:37:40.610-07:00Whew! I’ll bet that made an impression. It would ...Whew! I’ll bet that made an impression. It would have been easy to ooops and bury the knife in Mabb!<br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00200483339139860998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-17850913367828853502018-04-22T20:05:46.175-07:002018-04-22T20:05:46.175-07:00Hywela, oddly enough I tend to write best from a v...Hywela, oddly enough I tend to write best from a vivid visual image in my mind.<br /><br />Jean, as a rule people only make that mistake once :)<br /><br />Ed, I think that's a common wish, but Shayla is hunting for bigger game.Botanisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-8997789037866855842018-04-22T19:24:15.514-07:002018-04-22T19:24:15.514-07:00I was beginning to hope that a knife would get bur...I was beginning to hope that a knife would get buried IN Mabb.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-73050855390715066792018-04-22T17:48:19.117-07:002018-04-22T17:48:19.117-07:00When will people learn not to piss Shayla off? :) ...When will people learn not to piss Shayla off? :) Great visual scene. Nice job.Jean Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02047709505502621618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-9610830864317950432018-04-22T16:53:48.589-07:002018-04-22T16:53:48.589-07:00Wow, what a vividly written excerpt - I could visu...Wow, what a vividly written excerpt - I could visualize the scene like a film - and I hope Mabb was suitable nervous as the blades came nearer!Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-87904801215546426612018-04-22T16:52:47.737-07:002018-04-22T16:52:47.737-07:00Hi Diane, that music would probably be a good fit ...Hi Diane, that music would probably be a good fit :)<br /><br />Karen, thanks.<br /><br />Julie, glad the scene is coming across well.Botanisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-34898316660379456362018-04-22T13:08:34.070-07:002018-04-22T13:08:34.070-07:00Again, I'm in awe of the description and the v...Again, I'm in awe of the description and the vividness of this scene. Excellent writing, Ian! Juliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04162853663067579113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-38782567684396612652018-04-22T12:53:08.830-07:002018-04-22T12:53:08.830-07:00Wonderful imagery! Wonderful imagery! Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-78865909191039816792018-04-22T11:37:32.094-07:002018-04-22T11:37:32.094-07:00Wow! What a dance!!! Terrific visuals. I could alm...Wow! What a dance!!! Terrific visuals. I could almost hear Khatchaturian's Sabre Dance.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-50035753974226082642018-04-22T10:27:59.383-07:002018-04-22T10:27:59.383-07:00Hilary, Mabb's been pretty awful, but even so ...Hilary, Mabb's been pretty awful, but even so she's not been bad enough to warrant Shayla's <i>professional</i> attention :)Botanisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-30963663707349691682018-04-21T15:35:52.829-07:002018-04-21T15:35:52.829-07:00Hi Ian - oh pity!! I thought that was Mabb's ...Hi Ian - oh pity!! I thought that was Mabb's end ... but leads us on to another post in Shayla's journey ... cheers HilaryHilary Melton-Butcherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17596532480645510678noreply@blogger.com