tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post765905841181701378..comments2024-03-16T07:55:54.153-07:00Comments on Views From the Bald Patch: Weekend Writing Warriors December 11Botanisthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-75798128633710122502016-12-12T18:19:13.961-08:002016-12-12T18:19:13.961-08:00Diane, thank you!
Ed, not ordinary at all :)
Kim...Diane, thank you!<br /><br />Ed, not ordinary at all :)<br /><br />Kim, tune in next week...Botanisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-39439108329349052562016-12-12T10:26:28.227-08:002016-12-12T10:26:28.227-08:00This piece is full of awesome phrases, Ian. I can&...This piece is full of awesome phrases, Ian. I can't wait to read more!Kim Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08556808413747062433noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-17778068072132000922016-12-11T20:49:48.173-08:002016-12-11T20:49:48.173-08:00She's clearly not an ordinary paranoid!She's clearly not an ordinary paranoid!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-66850503143955826882016-12-11T19:44:50.484-08:002016-12-11T19:44:50.484-08:00You've got me hooked. Unique voice. Well done....You've got me hooked. Unique voice. Well done.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-71740371115740216162016-12-11T16:40:26.599-08:002016-12-11T16:40:26.599-08:00Christina, glad you think so! Beginnings are so im...Christina, glad you think so! Beginnings are so important.<br /><br />Cara, Shayla's life is one long threat!Botanisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-83399339872095631242016-12-11T13:04:38.299-08:002016-12-11T13:04:38.299-08:00Welcome back!
She faces a lot of threats! Nicely...Welcome back! <br /><br />She faces a lot of threats! Nicely written.Cara Bristolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13787980548582603649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-53417119723997644002016-12-11T12:09:27.132-08:002016-12-11T12:09:27.132-08:00What a fantastic start to a story. I'm on the ...What a fantastic start to a story. I'm on the edge of my seat already. Oh, and welcome back! :-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00200483339139860998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-91788643614488572242016-12-11T11:00:32.572-08:002016-12-11T11:00:32.572-08:00Elizabeth, I kinda liked it too :)
Stephen, thank...Elizabeth, I kinda liked it too :)<br /><br />Stephen, thanks!Botanisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-55776566087472084682016-12-11T10:27:54.291-08:002016-12-11T10:27:54.291-08:00You hook the reader instantly.You hook the reader instantly.stephen Hayeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17659054447637207734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-24420965602992840812016-12-11T10:24:48.298-08:002016-12-11T10:24:48.298-08:00enjoyed more security than any ordinary paranoid c...enjoyed more security than any ordinary paranoid could possibly hope for.<br />Love this phrase! Great snippet!Elizabeth Alsobrookshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18239143833626955490noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-91192710979458746352016-12-11T10:05:08.314-08:002016-12-11T10:05:08.314-08:00Julie, first draft done = still a long way to go :...Julie, first draft done = still a long way to go :)<br /><br />Angelica, life is never dull around Shayla.<br /><br />Veronica, more is on the way...Botanisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-9531236486721376092016-12-11T09:25:53.616-08:002016-12-11T09:25:53.616-08:00Nice to have you back on the Warriors and I enjoye...Nice to have you back on the Warriors and I enjoyed the snippet - a very intriguing beginning to the story and I definitely want to know more!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-1926092487660306902016-12-11T09:25:38.824-08:002016-12-11T09:25:38.824-08:00Sounds like the beginning of something exciting.Sounds like the beginning of something exciting.Angelica Dawsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06590063222683830585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-30833097672556140662016-12-11T09:05:11.653-08:002016-12-11T09:05:11.653-08:00Welcome back and congrats on finishing your first ...Welcome back and congrats on finishing your first draft! Such a powerful opening! Juliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04162853663067579113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-37885890895807386322016-12-11T08:32:10.391-08:002016-12-11T08:32:10.391-08:00Linda, she needs to get out, and fast, but easier ...Linda, she needs to get out, and fast, but easier said than done :)Botanisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-33074456121836756482016-12-11T08:30:25.552-08:002016-12-11T08:30:25.552-08:00Jessica, it felt good to finish that draft - and o...Jessica, it felt good to finish that draft - and on time, too!<br /><br />Hilary, Shayla is a bundle of trouble :)<br /><br />Marcia, that's the limitation of this forum. More to come, though...Botanisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-41277391061516131262016-12-11T08:29:03.773-08:002016-12-11T08:29:03.773-08:00Oops, better get out of there fast. And good for n...Oops, better get out of there fast. And good for noticing it so fast too, I can see how normal paranoid would be dead by now. Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13346034896296813841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-50285199956476827812016-12-11T06:28:13.604-08:002016-12-11T06:28:13.604-08:00Hey Ian! So glad you're back! This is a fantas...Hey Ian! So glad you're back! This is a fantastic opening, the only disappointment is that it has to be so short :-) Wishing you a wonderful Christmas! <br />Marciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07092928480361131154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-6987575968773179262016-12-11T03:42:21.314-08:002016-12-11T03:42:21.314-08:00Hi Ian - that's good to read ... and fascinati...Hi Ian - that's good to read ... and fascinating to see how Shayla is doing ... <br /><br />cheers and enjoy the festive run-up - HilaryHilary Melton-Butcherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17596532480645510678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-55345540036053922642016-12-10T19:59:46.882-08:002016-12-10T19:59:46.882-08:00Such an intriguing introduction! Great to be readi...Such an intriguing introduction! Great to be reading your snippets again. And congrats on finishing your story! :)Jessica E. Subjecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14356934162311768234noreply@blogger.com