tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post6788734780608694146..comments2024-03-16T07:55:54.153-07:00Comments on Views From the Bald Patch: Weekend Writing WarriorsBotanisthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-6619505657764901472014-05-06T18:20:41.153-07:002014-05-06T18:20:41.153-07:00Eleri, quiet, but not for long...
Valerie, thanks...Eleri, quiet, but not for long...<br /><br />Valerie, thanks.Botanisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-10668414525187550372014-05-05T14:24:15.352-07:002014-05-05T14:24:15.352-07:00Well done! I enjoy your writing style.
Hugs!
Va...Well done! I enjoy your writing style. <br /><br />Hugs!<br /><br />ValerieValeriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15463173488099670688noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-72079138756728679842014-05-04T20:13:18.880-07:002014-05-04T20:13:18.880-07:00Love that quiet moment where she endures the group...Love that quiet moment where she endures the group's evaluation and then moves forward. Powerful.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12742618211008888625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-6148446536212983832014-05-04T16:16:01.286-07:002014-05-04T16:16:01.286-07:00Sue Ann, I think it would depend who the "eve...Sue Ann, I think it would depend who the "everyone" are, and what they are expecting...<br /><br />Veronica, I'll cast ahead and see what I can usefully follow along this thread in 8 sentences. Shayla's bit was easy, fast action, but this section slows the pace somewhat.<br /><br />Lisa, lots of high-ranking females in this story :) There's no gender bias in this world so male/female is pretty balanced.Botanisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-23755271911694765122014-05-04T13:03:48.149-07:002014-05-04T13:03:48.149-07:00I love sci/fi! Kudos for a female in high power. L...I love sci/fi! Kudos for a female in high power. Love it!Lisa Medleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02292293577788930873noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-61278604033544589742014-05-04T12:18:06.895-07:002014-05-04T12:18:06.895-07:00Nice buildup, can't wait to see what happens n...Nice buildup, can't wait to see what happens next! Great 8!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-48641610186866492132014-05-04T09:59:14.797-07:002014-05-04T09:59:14.797-07:00One minor point: is this hall of 150 people so dim...One minor point: is this hall of 150 people so dimly lit that the blocking of light from a single door would be noticed by everyone?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-55334189057334490322014-05-04T09:43:14.594-07:002014-05-04T09:43:14.594-07:00Misha, she won't admit it openly, but this is ...Misha, she won't admit it openly, but this is her worst nightmare coming true.<br /><br />Delores, she's their boss, and a cranky one too :)<br /><br />Teresa, I hope a bit of both.<br /><br />Marcia, glad the tension is coming through.<br /><br />Millie, good, she's one of my favorite characters.Botanisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-82173327844583144012014-05-04T09:08:40.347-07:002014-05-04T09:08:40.347-07:00You've got me very curious about her.You've got me very curious about her.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05551671528722336812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-25404708395185043632014-05-04T07:59:49.464-07:002014-05-04T07:59:49.464-07:00Some palpable tension in the room. I really like t...Some palpable tension in the room. I really like this. Marciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07092928480361131154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-11222923299494343492014-05-04T06:59:39.295-07:002014-05-04T06:59:39.295-07:00Nicely done! You've painted her as formidable!...Nicely done! You've painted her as formidable! I'm not sure if she's feared or respected. :-) Good 8, Ian!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-60324255671737402352014-05-04T05:06:18.635-07:002014-05-04T05:06:18.635-07:00She must be pretty important if 150 people are wor...She must be pretty important if 150 people are worried about what kind of mood she's in lol.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-4233208450432162872014-05-03T20:33:02.547-07:002014-05-03T20:33:02.547-07:00Nicely written, I can feel the tension she's e...Nicely written, I can feel the tension she's experiencing. :-)Misha Gerrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06364173848456424521noreply@blogger.com