tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post4326899837288680630..comments2024-03-16T07:55:54.153-07:00Comments on Views From the Bald Patch: Weekend Writing Warriors March 18Botanisthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-89199316684911350822018-03-19T09:41:57.875-07:002018-03-19T09:41:57.875-07:00Libby, you got it right - Shayla is indeed deliber...Libby, you got it right - Shayla is indeed deliberating.Botanisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-24885282572876324522018-03-18T20:10:59.914-07:002018-03-18T20:10:59.914-07:00What a great hook! I loved the tension between the...What a great hook! I loved the tension between the spiteful mob and the others who are full of dread, all too aware they could be next.<br />It feels like Shayla is deliberating, wondering what to do next.Libby Campbellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00730858605854157221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-32455354327970779552018-03-18T15:11:09.071-07:002018-03-18T15:11:09.071-07:00Jessica, she does seem to be in an impossible situ...Jessica, she does seem to be in an impossible situation :)<br /><br />Ed, I can't wait to hold the first paperback draft. I think it's going to look good!<br /><br />Veronica, this whole dinner is one long train wreck, but things are about to turn a corner.<br /><br />Teresa, good observation. I guess it helps that her motivation as an assassin is to right wrongs, rather than being purely mercenary.<br /><br />Hywela, you got that right :)<br /><br />Diane, glad you can feel the embarrassment coming through.<br />Botanisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-66185926127681368002018-03-18T14:43:59.666-07:002018-03-18T14:43:59.666-07:00Veronica calls it perfectly "a train wreck ab...Veronica calls it perfectly "a train wreck about to happen." I cringed as she stood there, dying of embarrassment. Good luck on those edits.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-26752350440439251282018-03-18T11:48:20.682-07:002018-03-18T11:48:20.682-07:00Good luck with the proof reading, and Mabb is such...Good luck with the proof reading, and Mabb is such a nasty piece of work!Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-86987795647385781862018-03-18T11:00:48.727-07:002018-03-18T11:00:48.727-07:00It's interesting that she's an assassin ye...It's interesting that she's an assassin yet has more morals and ethics than most in attendance. :-)<br /><br />Yay on The Ashes of Home!! :-) Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-3699667987468052572018-03-18T08:35:06.321-07:002018-03-18T08:35:06.321-07:00The situation just gets worse and worse, yes? But ...The situation just gets worse and worse, yes? But in a skillfully written way that makes me want to keep reading despite the 'train wreck' of events here! Great snippet...Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-23317340200479732452018-03-17T23:18:29.923-07:002018-03-17T23:18:29.923-07:00Congrats on having your new baby almost ready for ...Congrats on having your new baby almost ready for swaddling clothes, Ian!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-65757151053010716612018-03-17T18:11:40.002-07:002018-03-17T18:11:40.002-07:00I wonder what the staff member will end up doing? ...I wonder what the staff member will end up doing? An intriguing snippet!Jessica E. Subjecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14356934162311768234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-55791428919420776542018-03-17T11:54:23.096-07:002018-03-17T11:54:23.096-07:00Hilary, luckily I've taken a bit of time off w...Hilary, luckily I've taken a bit of time off work for Spring Break. I should be able to blitz through the proof-reading in a few days.<br /><br />Susan, good luck with your own launch!Botanisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-53076307712080921982018-03-17T10:36:19.296-07:002018-03-17T10:36:19.296-07:00Good luck with the proof-reading and meeting your ...Good luck with the proof-reading and meeting your goal of publishing by the end of the month. My next book is almost ready to launch, too, but I'm thinking about running an ebook giveaway during a pre-order period. Maybe. Still not sure...Susan Flett Swiderskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09425315552148200073noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-36309303539060621842018-03-17T10:30:57.355-07:002018-03-17T10:30:57.355-07:00Well done Ian on getting your proofs through - enj...Well done Ian on getting your proofs through - enjoy the read through and careful proof-reading - Mabb is a bully - cheers HilaryHilary Melton-Butcherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17596532480645510678noreply@blogger.com