tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post2262296162813337879..comments2024-03-16T07:55:54.153-07:00Comments on Views From the Bald Patch: Weekend Writing WarriorsBotanisthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-35522382080465691102014-02-26T10:44:18.344-08:002014-02-26T10:44:18.344-08:00wow, I was wondering about her hostility and then ...wow, I was wondering about her hostility and then you zapped us with the word treason and her breaking his fingers. Wow! Great visuals.Chelle Corderohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15412268726863698528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-10694299795211525182014-02-26T07:56:37.456-08:002014-02-26T07:56:37.456-08:00Wow, loved the snippet; a great set up to keep my ...Wow, loved the snippet; a great set up to keep my interest - what is going to happen next?F. Stonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16241888058278268890noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-27930072986058090742014-02-25T20:02:37.530-08:002014-02-25T20:02:37.530-08:00Shell, I'm glad I made you laugh!
Pete, noth...Shell, I'm glad I made you laugh! <br /><br />Pete, nothing against men with tattoos on their foreheads per se, just ones who get in the way of her toasting a starship :)Botanisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-66163843973413001182014-02-25T17:50:07.969-08:002014-02-25T17:50:07.969-08:00Ouch. I guess she does not like men with tattoos o...Ouch. I guess she does not like men with tattoos on their foreheads. Smart woman.Smu Doodlehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14709677949920355173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-59658894784299057702014-02-25T06:14:24.893-08:002014-02-25T06:14:24.893-08:00That is a great excerpt. I was already laughing at...That is a great excerpt. I was already laughing at the second to last line and then she goes and breaks his fingers. Excellent. Shell Flowerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08127004188099765270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-35154685315278602722014-02-24T20:25:05.708-08:002014-02-24T20:25:05.708-08:00LOL! Sounds like folks enjoyed the last line. That...LOL! Sounds like folks enjoyed the last line. That's the great thing about short snippets - you can choose exactly where to finish :)Botanisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-2196405392137065482014-02-24T06:44:26.267-08:002014-02-24T06:44:26.267-08:00Haha, that was great! Always enjoy reading Shayla ...Haha, that was great! Always enjoy reading Shayla excerpts. Good luck with everything! :)David Batistahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16447011239238933425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-14213733007983372962014-02-23T20:33:19.871-08:002014-02-23T20:33:19.871-08:00Love that ending! Made me laugh. And, nice to ma...Love that ending! Made me laugh. And, nice to make your acquaintance.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05551671528722336812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-5082540759814546092014-02-23T19:44:16.473-08:002014-02-23T19:44:16.473-08:00Ha! Excellent twist! I like her spunk. Darn good w...Ha! Excellent twist! I like her spunk. Darn good writing too!<br /><a href="http://historysleuth.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">The Murders of Polly Frisch</a>HistorySleuthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05502098938801373264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-40992704813815313142014-02-23T14:23:19.640-08:002014-02-23T14:23:19.640-08:00Great. Ending. :0)
Hugs!
ValerieGreat. Ending. :0)<br /><br />Hugs!<br /><br />ValerieValeriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15463173488099670688noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-33605062276552991902014-02-23T13:08:38.201-08:002014-02-23T13:08:38.201-08:00What a last sentence!What a last sentence!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-16756457039464079692014-02-23T10:58:43.103-08:002014-02-23T10:58:43.103-08:00Ok wow, that's quite an ending! Loved it...mus...Ok wow, that's quite an ending! Loved it...must read more...great snippet!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-77224259835904882982014-02-23T09:51:33.037-08:002014-02-23T09:51:33.037-08:00Delores, who'd have guessed? :D
Teresa, thank...Delores, who'd have guessed? :D<br /><br />Teresa, thanks, I am planning to get this puppy out there before the summer, but that depends on a lot of steps that I'm new to so timelines are pure guesswork right now.<br /><br />Garrison, things do get interesting for Shayla...Botanisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-5610570639826642892014-02-23T08:55:20.227-08:002014-02-23T08:55:20.227-08:00Fun stuff. I like this Shayla. Now that she's ...Fun stuff. I like this Shayla. Now that she's broken this guy's fingers, things ought to get even mroe interesting...garrisonjameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09544523186717576771noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-29230876821865614252014-02-23T06:29:43.857-08:002014-02-23T06:29:43.857-08:00Wow! Your writing is amazingly fluid, Ian, even mo...Wow! Your writing is amazingly fluid, Ian, even more so than I remember. Wonderful details infused seamlessly. And that last line is a zinger! I want to know more. I want to read this story. Where are you with publication?<br /><br />AND, I want to visit that fortress on the top of this page! I can't imagine how I'd get there unless, of course, I could fly. In your stories, maybe I (Joe Reader) can. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-38406135163255034802014-02-23T04:59:41.131-08:002014-02-23T04:59:41.131-08:00Sounds like a gal after my own heart.Sounds like a gal after my own heart.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com