tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post2076722822546526007..comments2024-03-16T07:55:54.153-07:00Comments on Views From the Bald Patch: Weekend Writing Warriors January 6Botanisthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-22930817449539425202019-01-16T12:02:58.319-08:002019-01-16T12:02:58.319-08:00An interesting position she finds herself in. I wo...An interesting position she finds herself in. I would think a scary one as well in many ways.Ornery Owl of Naughty Netherworld Press and Readers Roost https://www.blogger.com/profile/07596105116325246476noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-53957295638205836252019-01-06T22:21:07.215-08:002019-01-06T22:21:07.215-08:00Lots of different things to wonder about here. Int...Lots of different things to wonder about here. Interesting!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00200483339139860998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-67023630431398592942019-01-06T21:05:00.142-08:002019-01-06T21:05:00.142-08:00Ed, thanks for your kind feedback.
Elaine, a good...Ed, thanks for your kind feedback.<br /><br />Elaine, a good start, but things get more and more difficult for her as time goes by.Botanisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-4488841177200181852019-01-06T18:11:40.271-08:002019-01-06T18:11:40.271-08:00She has a big job in front of her, but she's o...She has a big job in front of her, but she's off to a good start.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-35453316742489810482019-01-06T11:32:55.905-08:002019-01-06T11:32:55.905-08:00Great conversation. It felt very natural and belie...Great conversation. It felt very natural and believable, adding a nice hint at the emotional meaning of what's going on.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-14155357419602940052019-01-06T09:47:18.452-08:002019-01-06T09:47:18.452-08:00Alex, appearance is just one part of it. Knowledge...Alex, appearance is just one part of it. Knowledge and attitude matter too.<br /><br />Nancy, you've spotted something that will crop up in later chapters.<br /><br />Diane, he turns out to be a dangerous ally :)<br /><br />Veronica, the whole story is meant to be wrapped in intrigue, so that's a good sign.Botanisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-87159713046326139572019-01-06T08:19:20.916-08:002019-01-06T08:19:20.916-08:00I enjoy time spent with this character and can'...I enjoy time spent with this character and can't wait to see what significance there is to the use of the aerial cruisers. So much mystery and intrigue here! Great snippet...Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-42027749726595709952019-01-06T07:41:47.923-08:002019-01-06T07:41:47.923-08:00I'm enjoying this story, too, Ian. I hope he r...I'm enjoying this story, too, Ian. I hope he really is an ally. She's going to need one.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-5721472794649380062019-01-06T07:33:06.451-08:002019-01-06T07:33:06.451-08:00He certainly is an opinionated one - and could be ...He certainly is an opinionated one - and could be a good ally for her with his knowledge. Enjoying this, Ian!Nancy Gideonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07493107610530282642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-20100421558315534932019-01-06T04:53:05.282-08:002019-01-06T04:53:05.282-08:00Clothes alone won't hide her.Clothes alone won't hide her.Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-44269676207225888042019-01-05T21:52:24.312-08:002019-01-05T21:52:24.312-08:00Jessica, there are always things to learn, and of ...Jessica, there are always things to learn, and of course things will trip her up big time ... in due course :)<br /><br />Teresa, that is very true!Botanisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-74202925615456653852019-01-05T21:31:43.825-08:002019-01-05T21:31:43.825-08:00The technology she uses to change identity--the fa...The technology she uses to change identity--the face changing, is so intriguing. But, as this scene shows so well, a changed appearance is only one part of fooling others. <br /><br />Happy 2019, Ian! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-21133528660832898642019-01-05T18:14:28.242-08:002019-01-05T18:14:28.242-08:00No matter how hard she studied for this mission, i...No matter how hard she studied for this mission, it seems she still has things to learn. I hope nothing trips her up.Jessica E. Subjecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14356934162311768234noreply@blogger.com