tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post1535715628825659105..comments2024-03-16T07:55:54.153-07:00Comments on Views From the Bald Patch: Weekend Writing Warriors April 8Botanisthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-9253260629086248282018-04-08T21:35:39.877-07:002018-04-08T21:35:39.877-07:00Ed, ambitious, maybe, but she does have the traini...Ed, ambitious, maybe, but she does have the training at least ...Botanisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-23791966282716852612018-04-08T18:41:15.258-07:002018-04-08T18:41:15.258-07:00A sword dance? She's ambitious!A sword dance? She's ambitious!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-35147480129094115022018-04-08T18:18:08.229-07:002018-04-08T18:18:08.229-07:00Julie, Karen, Christina, stick around for the next...Julie, Karen, Christina, stick around for the next 4 weeks or so. I'm planning to post through to the end of this scene.<br /><br />Teresa, I don't know where my thoughts came from, probably seeing Tai Chi, which is very graceful.<br /><br />Nancy, Hywela, glad the tension is coming through.<br /><br />Stella, thanks.Botanisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-80044570846389280292018-04-08T17:49:12.045-07:002018-04-08T17:49:12.045-07:00I like how with so little description, I can see t...I like how with so little description, I can see the scene. Great job.Stella Telleriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11990643131467271476noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-55719549854999511862018-04-08T17:10:34.549-07:002018-04-08T17:10:34.549-07:00Great scene, full of tension and expectation. Can&...Great scene, full of tension and expectation. Can't wait for the next snippet!Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-29667404366588205832018-04-08T14:35:39.754-07:002018-04-08T14:35:39.754-07:00The play's the thing . . . Can't wait to s...The play's the thing . . . Can't wait to see what she's got planned. Great job building suspense, Ian.Nancy Gideonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07493107610530282642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-21707584536380962892018-04-08T14:17:01.914-07:002018-04-08T14:17:01.914-07:00I like how you write her fight moves as a graceful...I like how you write her fight moves as a graceful dance. It does seem so natural to her. This scene shows that underneath, she is a good person. :-) Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-3464802565165431882018-04-08T13:04:32.168-07:002018-04-08T13:04:32.168-07:00Ooh, I’m looking forward to this show. I’ll bet ev...Ooh, I’m looking forward to this show. I’ll bet everyone else is too!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00200483339139860998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-70272169023548204872018-04-08T12:03:05.056-07:002018-04-08T12:03:05.056-07:00I'm curious to know what will happen next. Gre...I'm curious to know what will happen next. Great imagery!Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-47598336766297975232018-04-08T11:28:09.115-07:002018-04-08T11:28:09.115-07:00Love the description of the action here, Ian! Look...Love the description of the action here, Ian! Looking forward to the next installment! Juliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04162853663067579113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-630537663011169252018-04-08T09:14:07.778-07:002018-04-08T09:14:07.778-07:00Jessica, we'll see over the next few snippets....Jessica, we'll see over the next few snippets.<br /><br />Veronica, at least she has the training, being self-possessed is rather a survival skill in her line of work!<br /><br />Hilary, there's only one baddie she needs to entrance here :)Botanisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-80482667030379121722018-04-08T07:41:50.843-07:002018-04-08T07:41:50.843-07:00Hi Ian - sounds like an opera coming up - that wil...Hi Ian - sounds like an opera coming up - that will perhaps entrance the baddies ... interesting to see what's going to happen - cheers HilaryHilary Melton-Butcherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17596532480645510678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-68426764045933212172018-04-08T07:37:53.552-07:002018-04-08T07:37:53.552-07:00I have the feeling they're in for quite a show...I have the feeling they're in for quite a show in the next few minutes. She's so very self possessed! Enjoyed the excerpt...Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1828517374142265050.post-27133773005310605082018-04-08T05:24:34.247-07:002018-04-08T05:24:34.247-07:00Very curious as to what happens next. Great snippe...Very curious as to what happens next. Great snippet!Jessica E. Subjecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14356934162311768234noreply@blogger.com